2021年九年级英语上册Unit2GreatPeople写作能力提升练课件新版冀教版

UNIT 2 Great People,写作能力提升练,本单元的话题为“伟大人物”本单元的写作要求是学生们能够简单介绍某位伟大人物的生平及其伟大之处，并能从他们身上学到伟大的精神单 词：,meaning, survey, solve, lifetime, false, writer,,,progress, greatly,短 语：,be born in, be well known for, learn from,,,work on, graduate from,句 型：,1. He will be greatly missed.,,2. He is famous because of his courage and hard work.,常用衔接词：,as we know, because, also...,榜样的力量是无穷的，每个人心中都有一个英雄形象激励自己请你阅读下面一位英雄的信息卡，以“,The Hero in My Heart”,为题写一篇英语短文要求：,1.,包含信息卡上的所有内容；,,2.,适当拓展，如向英雄学习的感想、行动等；,,3.,不能出现表明你身份的信息；,,4. 80,词左右。

信息卡,,Dr. Norman Bethune,,Nationality: Canada,,Hobby: taking photos,,Main story: saved a lot of Chinese people;,,opened hospitals; invented medical tools,【,审题指导,】,,1.,体裁：,记叙文,,2.,人称：,描述一个人以第三人称为主，介绍个人观点常用第一人称,,3.,时态：,主要以一般过去时态为主，一般现在时等其他时态为辅,【,思路构建,】,【,范文赏析,】,The Hero in My Heart,,As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr. Norman Bethune is my hero.,,Dr. Norman Bethune was born in Canada. And he was interested in taking photos. He is famous in China because he did so much for the Chinese people in the Anti-Japanese War.,During his stay in China, he saved a lot of Chinese people. Also, he opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He was a great doctor in the world.,As a famous doctor and an international fighter, he helped Chinese a lot. I will remember him forever and I want to be a good doctor like him in the future.,点评：,1. As we know, because, also,等的使用让文章的,,连接更流畅。

2.,时态的使用准确无误我们都知道美国登山运动员,Aron Ralston,,他的故事令人感动，激励人心在我们身边，一定也有那么一些人和事，他们或许平凡，或许渺小，但却能鼓舞我们，催人奋进请以“,The person encouraging me”,为题，写一篇,80,词左右的短文要求：,1.,任选一项品质特征，并用具体事例加以阐述；,,2.,文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名基本情况,年龄、职业、外貌,……,品质特征,勇敢、善良、勤奋,……,（任选其一）,具体事例,…,对你的影响,…,The person encouraging,me,,______________________________________________,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,The person encouraging me,My friend Daniel encourages me a lot in many ways. Now let me tell you something about him. He comes from America. Now he and I are in the same school in China. He has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses. He has many good personalities. He is helpful. He often helps his classmates with the homework, and also helps the old,people,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,,______________________________________________________,cross the road. He is kind to others. He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help the people in need. He is also creative and organized. For example,，,he can create a TV program and organize the class activities. He likes to share his things with others. So Daniel encourages me a lot. He encourages me to be kind and helpful.,。